1-Bartholomae means that individual that writes a short story, an essay, a poem, etc... must interpret it from many perspectives as if he were different individuals reading his work. The individual that basically writes the paper must write from the point of view of a professor or instructor. For Example, you are writing a book on mechanics. One individual may agree with your point of view on how an engine may put together, but another may have another point of view on how it is and in what order. This is the point he suggest to us when we write as authors.
2-Bartholomae is suggesting that when a person becomes “insiders” within academic discourse, that they begin to write as if they were performing not for a class but for the field there are in to test whether they have the knowledge or not.
3-The differences of the example begin with the first students essay. The essay was very concise and uncomplicated. His vocabulary is very minimal and further down the road it was reveled that he plagiarized what he had in his essay from Billy-White Shoes Johnson. In addition to that, the next essay the student uses a vast amount of vocabulary and following that she also contradicts herself multiple times. Primarily she introduces herself as not being creative but using imitation and following thats she states that she was creative to a point making use of her imagination.
Friday, January 30, 2009
Journal Entry 2:http://blogs.motortrend.com/6416300/earnings/ford-loses-146-billion-in-2008-taps-more-credit-to-avoid-federal-bailout/index.html
Claim: Ford Loses $14.6 Billion in 2008
Data: Ford has declined in quality over the years.
Warrant: People who invest in Ford Motor's stock didn't think the company would decline.
Grounds: For long-time Ford drivers and owners they will always be a good quality-made product.
Backing: The journalist sees Ford as a motor company in which is unreliable.
Qualifier: If Ford was a great automobile, it's competition would be "next-to-nothing."
Conditions for Rebuttal: Unless they find someone to purchase them and recover the company by placing a great quality for a vehicle for an affordable price.
Data: Ford has declined in quality over the years.
Warrant: People who invest in Ford Motor's stock didn't think the company would decline.
Grounds: For long-time Ford drivers and owners they will always be a good quality-made product.
Backing: The journalist sees Ford as a motor company in which is unreliable.
Qualifier: If Ford was a great automobile, it's competition would be "next-to-nothing."
Conditions for Rebuttal: Unless they find someone to purchase them and recover the company by placing a great quality for a vehicle for an affordable price.
Journal Entry 1: http://blogs.motortrend.com/6416300/earnings/ford-loses-146-billion-in-2008-taps-more-credit-to-avoid-federal-bailout/index.html
"Ford Loses $14.6 Billion in 2008, Taps More Credit to Avoid Federal Bailout"
The claim that was being made here is that the "Ford Motor Company" lost 14.6 billion last year. With this major change, ford has declined help from the federal bailout plan and continued cutting staff and ties with other companies. ford is currently looking for a purchaser. Without that they will continue to decline and even may have difficulties to continue sustaining Jaguar/Land rover or even mass producing as they did in the past. In addition to this, the upside is the Ford did not have to pay any dividends this term, hence causing stock holders to not gain and the Ford family to still have some revenue in their hands.
They type of claim is a fact. Ford has delcined over the past years in business and is struggling to even compete in today's new car market. As proven in the past, Ford motors in not a reliable or dependent vehicle that one can own for a long time or even a company that presents a good product.
The type of appeal that is being used is ethos. According to Motor Trend, a company which studies, evaluates, and analyzes vehicles for the past years, their analyst have been watching Ford for years and as many other sources, they all agree the Ford's quality is on a steady decline and as well as loosing business from the average family that uses a vehicle for transportation from "point A to B."
The claim that was being made here is that the "Ford Motor Company" lost 14.6 billion last year. With this major change, ford has declined help from the federal bailout plan and continued cutting staff and ties with other companies. ford is currently looking for a purchaser. Without that they will continue to decline and even may have difficulties to continue sustaining Jaguar/Land rover or even mass producing as they did in the past. In addition to this, the upside is the Ford did not have to pay any dividends this term, hence causing stock holders to not gain and the Ford family to still have some revenue in their hands.
They type of claim is a fact. Ford has delcined over the past years in business and is struggling to even compete in today's new car market. As proven in the past, Ford motors in not a reliable or dependent vehicle that one can own for a long time or even a company that presents a good product.
The type of appeal that is being used is ethos. According to Motor Trend, a company which studies, evaluates, and analyzes vehicles for the past years, their analyst have been watching Ford for years and as many other sources, they all agree the Ford's quality is on a steady decline and as well as loosing business from the average family that uses a vehicle for transportation from "point A to B."
Wednesday, January 14, 2009
List of Interest in My Life
Expertise in:
- Computers
- Modifying Cars (Exterior & Interior)
- Wood Refinishing
- Interior Remodeling & Design
- EBay
- Live sound
Interested in:
- Religion
- Anatomy & Physiology
- Government
- Music
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